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06 Dec 2006 09:47 pm
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Heres a preview from my upcoming halo fiction: “Infection”

(I have taken choice A)

This is a small sample, when it’s done, you will find it at www.fanfiction.net in the games section, int he halo subsection, expect no action in the preview. also to avoid spoilers, it’s very short. Also, sorry about the bad format,

Infection
Chapter One:
1235 Hours, November 11th, 2552 (Military Calendar) /UNSC Destroyer: Thermopylae, in defensive cluster around Planet Earth.



Captain Joseph Curthoys Stood in front of the foreword view screen of the bridge,
He was proud standing in his new ship, it was pressed, and made ready for combat less then 2 weeks ago, and it was like new. The Captain had seen much combat, but from a different point of view, behind 5 meters of hard Titanium A.
He tapped a few commands on his view screen. A strong male voice boomed through the bridge, and above a small circular panel, the holographic figure of a Greek man stood, in full Greek battle Armor. “I heard that” he said calmly. “Leonidas, I need you to do a calibration check on the archer pods, some men down in engineering reported there were some errors earlier.”
“Already done sir,” The AI replied as it vanished back into the panel. The Captain Examined the defensive cluster around earth, it was built as hard as stone, since Reach fell from the covenant, Earth began building up its defensive, it was now two times stronger then the defense of reach, with a fleet several times bigger, And since that...Spartan found the new technology, the UNSC has begun the process of upgrading ours.
The Captain scowled, the thought of one of those super powered freaks filled his mind with despair, and humans can win this war without them. It pained him even more to know that one was on bored.
Leonidas popped back from the panel; a dim red light from his base color filled the small corner of the bridge, “Check done sir, The archer pods are having some wiring errors, it’s beyond software treatment, I can call some human personnel down there to fix it if you wish sir.” “Do it.” He said, “And make sure there is no screwing around with them whatsoever.” “Aye Sir” Leonidas said as he disappeared again.
The captain continued review the ships files, this was a beautiful ship, although in appearance it was no different from any other destroyer. It was armed to the teeth with explosive and ballistic weapons, the triple MAC gun was hidden safely under the ships belly, and there were enough extra AA guns and 90 caliber turrets around the ship to keep it safe from Seraph fighters, but the most beautiful addition to this ship…was the quadruple alphabet Archer pod missile rows, every single other destroyer had two, but this one had A threw Z twice on each side.
He smiled, the thought of unleashing over 100 archer pods filled him with enjoyment. He looked around the bridge, its circular design was mildly empty, and he had not set any plants or a couch to rest during downtime up yet. But overall, it was nice.
The captain began strolling around the bridge, he bent down and looked over a new ensigns view screen, the young bridge officer hesitated, and then continued with his work, The Captain continued with his stroll, the Ensign was in control of the MAC cannon.



The captain returned to his position in the front of the bridge.
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Last edited 06 Dec 2006 09:52 pm by CPO Fraser
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Good start.
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06 Dec 2006 09:58 pm
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NEREVAR117 wrote: Good start.



Thanks, this is the first draft by the way.
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OIC.
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